A Friend to My Life
What is a “friend”? In my opinion, a friend is somebody who tells you what to do when you hesitate about which way to go. A friend is somebody who always supports you when you are disappointed. The most important of all, a friend is somebody you can depend on.
“Life without a friend is death.” is the words I believe in. If there were a life without friends, that must be grievous. Because when you are in trouble, nobody helps you. A friend is the best mental teacher. Everyone has a friend who you like most, but it’s not everyone can find a person who not only changes you but also treat you like you do. And I call that “The one”.
Fortunately, I have a “The one”. The friend who affects me most is called Brian. I depend on him a great deal, even though I am twenty now. I met him at the young age of ten in a fortuitous change, which he was hurt. It wasn’t until we had an open-talk that he became my best friend. He did all the things which the meaning of friends in my thought. He treats me like I do, he tells me what to do when I’m boggle… He helps me, whatever and whenever. He is the one for me. “Like knows like” is the way we get alone. We both hope that our friendship will be forever.
“Life without a friend is death.” is the words I believe in. If there were a life without friends, that must be grievous. Because when you are in trouble, nobody helps you. A friend is the best mental teacher. Everyone has a friend who you like most, but it’s not everyone can find a person who not only changes you but also treat you like you do. And I call that “The one”.
Fortunately, I have a “The one”. The friend who affects me most is called Brian. I depend on him a great deal, even though I am twenty now. I met him at the young age of ten in a fortuitous change, which he was hurt. It wasn’t until we had an open-talk that he became my best friend. He did all the things which the meaning of friends in my thought. He treats me like I do, he tells me what to do when I’m boggle… He helps me, whatever and whenever. He is the one for me. “Like knows like” is the way we get alone. We both hope that our friendship will be forever.
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Dear blogger,
The first paragraph is good definition of "a friend".
The most important of all, a friend is somebody (someone) you can depend on.
The second paragraph is something error in the sentences. E.x. I believe“Life without a friend is death.” (is the words I believe in.)** (If there were a life without friends, that must be grievous.) Because when you are in trouble, nobody helps you. A friend is the best mental teacher. Everyone has a friend who you like most, but it's not easy for everyone to find a person who not only changes you but also treat you as like you do. And I call that “The one”.
However, you don't set an example "Lives of great men all remind me". Who can affect on your behavior in the poem-- A Psalm of Life. Furthermore, your conclusion did not illustrate your best friends' conduct to influence you in detail.
Do you know what it's meaning of "boggle"? It's verb not adjective. Please don't confuse the word use. What's meaning of "Like knows like"?
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